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Thursday, August 13, 2020

dad feelings

 Graphic Organiser for tracking the emotions of a character

                              Shipwrecked   

 Level 2 October 2013     


Write a sentence, describing Dad’s emotions at each part of the story. The first one is done for you. Think carefully about why Dad felt that way and use because in your sentence.

Part of the story

Dad’s emotions

“He loved the sea and loved messing about in boats. One day, he went out in a boat on his own.”

E.g. Dad was feeling happy and excited because he was out on his boat and he loved being on boats. 

  “He heard a funny bubbling sound”


Oh no!!!

“Oh, No”


Dad could see only a few islands far away on the horizon.

“He put it on and began to swim”

He grad one flipper.

“The sky grew darker and darker”

His body glowing bright green in the black water.

“I hope the glow doesn’t attract the sharks”

Then dad heard a noise.

“That’s the sound of waves breaking”

Crash! Crash! He swam as fast as he could towards the sound.

“Coral! I must be on a reef”

Of coral

“With the last of his strength, he hauled himself up on to the rocks”

Then he collapsed into an exhausted sleep.

“This is a very small island. There doesn’t seem to be anyone else here”

He walked around to the next bay and then he saw another island.

“Dad couldn’t believe he had to go swim again,but he had no choice”

Here I go 

“Excuse me can I have a drink of water please”


The end………...