WALT Create a story
Blurb:
The task was to create an interesting story based on our plan and the prompts from a slide deck.
Reflection:
I learned that... I could write an interesting story about Peppa and include a twist.
I enjoyed ...writing about Peppa the pig and her friend
I found it challenging... to write a longer more detailed story.
To improve I will... check my punctuation and use past tense.
Kia ora Kahurangi, ka pai for having a go at writing your Peppa pig story. I like how you wrote a short story and put a little twist in your story, tino pai. Maybe next time you could proofread your writing to include punctuation, check it makes sense and consistently use past tense in your narrative writing. Kia kaha, Ms Peters.
ReplyDeleteHi Kahurangi my name is Jade, I am a year 8 student at Paihia School. I really like your blog post about Peppa Pig because I like how you have added a cliff hanger for an ending to make people want to read more/ or find out what happens next. I have never done a blog post about peppa pig before but I used to watch it as a kid. What was your favourite part about making this blog post?
ReplyDeleteKeep up the great work! Bye!
Hi Jade, Thank you for comment on my blog. Thank you for giving me FB and FF. My Favourite part was it didn't take that long to write. Thank you. Blog ya later.
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