Kia ora! I am a Year 7 student in Room 5 at Ahipara School, in the Far North of New Zealand. My teacher is Ms Peters. This is where I share my learning. Please leave a positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.
Kia ora Kahurangi, ka pai for having a go at writing a Whale story. I like the sizzling start you used and the images you included, tino pai. Maybe next time you could proofread your writing to include punctuation, check it makes sense and add more detail. Kia kaha, Ms Peters.
Kia ora Kahurangi, ka pai for having a go at writing a Whale story. I like the sizzling start you used and the images you included, tino pai. Maybe next time you could proofread your writing to include punctuation, check it makes sense and add more detail. Kia kaha, Ms Peters.
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